What is the thesis for your paper? how the divorce affected my social life and expressing my emotions.
List the main points you make in your paper. The doctor i went to, my mother's friend, and my father/new family
What was the most helpful advice you received from your peer evaluation? I create many Run on sentences
What was the most helpful information you received in class for your paper? Add more information to my introduction paragraph.
How many drafts of this paper do you think you wrote and how/when did you write them? For example, did you compose at the keyboard, did you write lots of notes to yourself, did you pre-write or outline, did you write in small chunks of time or sit down and produce an entire draft at one sitting? I think I wrote 2 drafts,I composed on the laptop and thought of things to include and typed it.
What would you do differently with this paper to make it more effectively, or what did you try to do that you just don’t think you got a good handle on? I think I could had added more explanation
What are most pleased with about this paper? I am most pleased about that I wrote about my parents divorce
Hi Chris,
ReplyDeleteWhen you anticipated writing this draft, did you fear you might encounter writers block? I see that you are most pleased with writing about the subject. It isn't always easy. I sometimes have to wait to write about a traumatic time in my life, so that I have time to process the event.
Ms. C